words: in order

February 26, 2008

somtimes, things need to be thought over

Filed under: free write — Jenn @ 9:50 pm

a thought I didn’t want to forget … but needs more thinking on

though I shake you
and hope for a heart-start rush
from your reaction,
it’s only when I crack you
can I admit
you’re as empty as you feel

3 Comments »

  1. sorry, I cannot understand “as empty as you feel”

    Comment by nomutter — March 16, 2008 @ 6:00 am

  2. Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway … nice blog to visit.

    cheers, Robber
    .

    Comment by Robber — June 18, 2008 @ 9:16 am

  3. yeah, I’m still not sure where I’m going with this one :P

    Comment by Jenn — June 18, 2008 @ 1:58 pm


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